One day a family was stuck in lava. And they wished for help but no one came. They saw something in the sky. It saw a bird and a girl. The family asked help from my family but she did not come then. The lava came closer and she came they were safe but she left someone the save my baby girl pls and she di .They thank her for everything but she said it was my job and flu away and they whet back home but a superveiln was on the louse and she came to the family house and hied they called a superhero and it was her the girl and again she help them the said came to dinner at 2:00 she said ok she they were super happy and that all bye.
Hi Gurbaz
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your narrative writing! I like how you had a beginning, middle and end to your story. Dont forget to read back through your writing before you post it and check for anything you can improve.
Good effort.
Miss Hudson